Punishment - Veronica Mars slash
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flwrpwr_vampyreTitle: Punishment
Author: flwrpwr_vampyre
Pairing: Dick/Beaver
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Dick grew angrier the more he thought of what had happened earlier.
Spoilers/Warnings: Spoilers for the brothers’ plot in 2.13. Warnings – incest, rough sex and slight dub-con
Link to a picture of the brothers, Dick is the blonde and Beaver the brunette.
Dick grew angrier the more he thought of what had happened earlier. Seeing his brother with that fucking nerd girl; acting all lovey-dovey. It was sick, the way Beaver had been acting. He’d hoped to get all his anger out mocking him but the way Beav had looked at him, like he’d been betrayed and then how he had begged Dick to stop only made the older boy want to hurt him more. Then Beaver and the little nerd had hired that fucking transvestite whore. He pictured their laughing faces and almost saw red.
Now Dick had Beaver flat on his back in his bed, legs over Dick’s shoulders and he was going to punish his younger brother the only way that would matter. He barely prepared him, slicking up his cock only to make it easier on himself. Then he pushed inside roughly, enjoying how Beav’s face twisted in pain.
“Fuck you,” he growled, staring down at his brother who just looked back up him with those fucking big sad eyes. “Fuck you and fuck her.”
He started up at a rough pace, not even giving Beaver a chance to get used to him. He knew he was large and that without that pause it would continue hurting. He felt satisfaction at the thought and leaned forward, crushing his brother’s legs in between their chests. Biting and nipping at Beaver’s neck, listening to the breaths that were gasped out in time with his thrusts and the quiet ows that spilled out of those down-turned lips.
Dick slowed down but thrust in deeper, pushing himself up just enough to be able to reach Beav’s nipples. They were so fucking sensitive and he paused with thumb and pointer around them just to see his brother’s eyes widen in shock. Then he gripped them and fucking twisted and Beaver actually screamed as he arched, eyes flying shut and fingers scrabbling uselessly at Dick’s hands.
“Oh fuck, shit!” the younger boy shrieked, clawing up Dick’s arms. “Please stop! Dick! Please, it hurts! Fuck! Please!”
Dick just ignored the words, focusing on the body bent in half under him, twisting and arcing in agony. He moved faster, able to get so fucking deep from this angle. He enjoyed the pain on Beaver’s face; the younger boy looked so goddamn beautiful like this. He kept up the pressure on Beav’s nipples until his brother’s cries and pleas turned into dry sobs that wracked his skinny chest. When a sorry whimpered its way out Dick took pity on him.
“Really? Are you fucking sorry?” he snarled, giving an extra hard wrench with his fingers.
“Yes, oh god, yes!” Beaver screamed, body jerking in time with the thrusts. His nails dug into Dick’s biceps as he thrashed, trying to get away. “I’m so fucking sorry, please forgive me! I’m sorry!”
At that Dick released his hold and Beaver’s quiet yell as the blood rushed back made his cock twitch with the temptation to come. So he slowed down, settling back and moving Beaver’s legs so that they were wrapped around his waist. Reaching down he slid his fingers around the soft length there and began to work it.
In no time at all Beaver was hard and the hitched-out sobs turned into quiet moans. He was sliding back into the lazy thrusts and forward into Dick’s fingers. The older boy used his other hand to trace the open lips and along the nose so similar to his own. He sped up slightly and tightened his grip on Beaver and with a cry of “Dick!” Beaver came, his whole body tensing around his brother. His ass clenched so hard around Dick that the blonde saw sparks and then was coming also, gripping pale hips so hard that he was afraid of leaving bruises.
When he was able to focus again it was on Beaver looking well fucked, covered in a sheen of sweat with nipples that were almost purple. Dick shuddered, caught in an aftershock at the sight and then rolled them both over so that he was still inside his little brother. Beaver cuddled in close, wrapping his arms around Dick and planting little frantic kisses on his lips, apologizing in between each of them.
Dick pulled back a little, cradling Beaver’s head in his hands. “I forgave you already,” he said softly, leaning forward and nuzzling the brunette’s forehead with his nose. “There’s nothing left to apologize for.”
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Date: 2008-02-26 09:33 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-02-26 09:41 pm (UTC)Thanks for the comment!! I'm glad you liked it!
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Date: 2008-02-26 10:34 pm (UTC)Biting and nipping at Beaver’s neck, listening to the breaths that were gasped out in time with his thrusts and the quiet ows that spilled out of those down-turned lips.
Fuck yeah. I like these two, you should do more with them.
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Date: 2008-02-26 10:54 pm (UTC)I love that line also, and the image of Beaver in that position. Mmmm
Thanks for teh awesome comment!
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Date: 2008-02-27 03:40 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-02-27 03:44 am (UTC)Thanks for the awesome comment!
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Date: 2008-03-07 09:18 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-03-08 05:43 pm (UTC)Thanks so much for the comment!!
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Date: 2008-03-14 04:54 am (UTC)This was soooo good and hot! You've now really made me want to watch the seasons and you know I am planning on it! Two hot brothers together like this? My heart is fluttering. lol
Great job hun and I can't wait for more, I'm on pins and needles!
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Date: 2008-03-14 07:11 pm (UTC)I do have more but it's not done yet. I'm debating adding a second pairing to it.
I love this fic.
Date: 2008-11-12 04:58 pm (UTC)My favorite part was this-
Beaver cuddled in close, wrapping his arms around Dick and planting little frantic kisses on his lips, apologizing in between each of them.
That is so freaking HOT. How he is acting so supplicating to Dick who practically just raped him. Guh.....you have the dom/sub relationship down for sure. I love how Beaver was acting there, begging for Dicks forgiveness, even when something so harsh had been done to him. Perfect.
(well that part AND reading about the position of Beav's legs...,sdfkhfkh MY GOD! when beav's legs were up on Dick's shoulders and he was pushing into him roughly, and then when Dick switched them to wrap around his waist!! Both images nearly slayed me)
I actually started to consider the Dick/Beaver pairing AFTER I got into Wincest. Speaking of....have you ever seen Supernatural because I think you could make some insanely awesome Wincest fics between those two brothers. Sam and Dean Winchester are so desperate for each other it's pathetic, they have this totally brilliant "I can't breathe without you" relationship. Based on how much I loved this Cassidy/Dick fic, I just KNOW you could write some really great Sam/Dean.
Re: I love this fic.
Date: 2008-11-13 03:28 am (UTC)*giggles* Had to "eavesdrop," because yes, the show is awesome, and
Re: I love this fic.
Date: 2008-11-13 03:47 am (UTC)I do think that Beaver really looks up to Dick and that he hates this but he still can't help wanting that approval.
I have at least one other fic of them in the works but have hit writer's block on everything I'm writing so I have no idea when it'll get finished.
And I do love Supernatural and the 'cest there but I haven't written anything that isn't daddycest and don't know if I ever will. So I'm sorry to disappoint there.
Anyways... Thanks for making my day with this comment and I'll try to finish my other fic even though it's a bit more smoopy then this and entirely consensual.
Re: I love this fic.
Date: 2008-11-13 11:35 am (UTC)Hey I'll take shmoopy and entirely consenual too! It just takes a talented writer to be able to do dub-con really well. So bravo.
I read whatever dub-con I can in Wincest. I just think it is the best way to introduce the brothers to a sexual relationship, but I've noticed that the majority of Dick/Beaver fics are established relationship. I LOVE first-time fics myself, in fact that is 99% of what I read, I just love a good fic where Sam and Dean are merely brothers but through circumstances they can't control, they are FORCED to become sexual and THAT brings about the feelings for each other. And if it's slightly uderage like 15 or 16, it's even better. That is my FAVORITE. I would love to read a first-time between Dick and Beaver, preferably if Beaver was somewhat unwilling. I've read only two complete non-cons in Wincest that I liked, otherwise I don't usually go for the straight out non-con. One of them (which I'm currently trying to relocate!) was when Dean had non-concensual sex with Sam once or maybe a couple times while growing up (but again I don't know how non-con it is because after the first time Sam sort of just allows him to), but it makes him incapable of being attracted to anyone else other than Dean when he is older. Dean regrets what he did when they are in their twenties but Sam still has this unnatural attachment to him and it all stems from the psychological impact of what happened between them when they were younger.
Anyway, I'm describing this because I think that would make a good Dick/Beaver fic too. I could see Dick initially forcing Beaver when he is younger, and that affecting him to the point where he doesn't want anyone else but Dick. (which esentially is how their relationship is painted in most fics but it would be interesting to see it in a first-time fic)
I'm not sure why incest pairings draw me in. I think it is because being in love with someone you are related to...someone who knows you inside and out....more than ANYONE, is so much more intimate than falling in love with a stranger. Even if I will never see any Wincest from you, it's cool, IMO it's a shame (because you're so good!)..but everyone has their OTP, Sam/Dean just happen to mine, and unfortunately I strongly dislike daddycest, not that it's something I don't think should be written about, but I'm just too possessive over the brothers to allow them to be with anyone else but each other.
I can't wait for your next fic....and I'm sorry about writing a book!
Re: I love this fic.
Date: 2008-11-13 08:57 pm (UTC)I haven't been able to find many Dick/Beaver fics anyways so I tend to just devour any good ones I find.
I do like that idea for a fic. I'd want to find some way to incorporate Beav's abuse in to it because I think that has a huge bearing on who he is and how he'd react to Dick's advances.
I love incest because of what you mentioned and because of the taboo. People shy away from it even if they have all kinds of other taboo kinks.
I love daddycest. At least in the Spn fandom because their relationship with John is just so fucked up and almost every daddycest fic I've found is equally fucked up.
I am going to be working on stuff. Even if I have to force myself.
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Date: 2008-11-13 03:34 am (UTC)*pants a little and licks lips*
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Date: 2008-11-13 03:36 am (UTC)And yeah, they're awesome with the dub-con. And the 'cest in general. Or maybe it's just that I now see 'cest everywhere. Thanks a lot Heroes and Supernatural. Lol
Anyways, we WILL watch it together and it will be awesome.
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Date: 2008-11-13 03:51 am (UTC)'Cestuous dub-con is the best dub-con. 'Cest is best, words from my mother. And my sister, as she smacked my ass. Hmm... I guess I see it everywhere too. Started with OTH and the slam into the car scene, as you know, but my first "YAY!" 'cest pairing was SPN. And that comm started out so tiny, can you believe it? And then after Nathan and Peter, 'cest became the new... er... pink? *cracks up* Now it's like a show has to have 'cest or it just isn't as popular.
We can watch VM after our... well, you know. Gotta be "masculine" and shit right now. *sniffles*
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Date: 2008-11-13 03:56 am (UTC)My first 'cest pairing was... the twin brothers from Good Charlotte. Yep. So not only was it 'cest it was twincest and rps twincest at that. Go me.
*wipes eyes surreptitiously* It will cheer us up afterwards.
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Date: 2008-11-13 05:50 am (UTC)We'll do speed after we don't cry. I don't want to be miserable and juiced. I'd probably do some crazy shit that'd scare the fuck out of people.
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Date: 2008-11-13 05:53 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-11-13 05:57 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-11-13 05:59 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-11-13 06:02 am (UTC)ITA...well....somewhat...lol
Date: 2008-11-13 12:00 pm (UTC)I'm half and half on this. I agree that it is definitaly becoming more important especially as shows are realizing how a strong online fandom can carry a show so it seems like a lot of shows are playing off that theme, but I don't necessarily slash EVERY sibling or familial relationship I see. I know I started watching Prison Break on DVD last summer and even though I had shipped Wincest for a long time prior, it was while watching the interaction between the two brothers, Link and Michael, that I truly understood how DIFFERENT Sam and Dean's relationship IS. I remember watching Prison Break and thinking "Now THAT is how two brothers SHOULD act!!!" Which was (from what I could tell) NOTHING like how Sam and Dean act towards each other.
So I sometimes don't understand how people can ship just any slash pairing be it incest or not. I.E. Clark and Lex were the only other TV show pair that I shipped, but I lost interest because it just WASN'T in the show, it was almost completely contrived by author's of fanfiction. That is how I found Sam and Dean because it IS in the show practically every episode how intense they feel about one another. For me, there needs to be a basis for a pairing, but I see all too many people who just ship any two male characters together and I just can't do that.
But speaking of something being totally "in" now is the RPS thing, I swear people are now puposely trying to create "buzz" for their movies and such by using this tactic. Like with Jared and Jensen, it's just natural how the J2 fandom came about, and I think it got noticed that a lot of attention went to the show by simply interviewing Jared and Jensen together and having fans become attached to THEM as a pair. Speculating about those creates attention for SPN too.
I just know I was watching I don't knwo...some TVguide special the other day and a new movie that is coming out features Jason Biggs and Dane Cook, and one character is trying to help the other one "get a girl". Well this TVguide thing was all about how Dane and Jason went out on this "date" in RL to help them get comfortable with each other so they work good together. There was joking about them holding hands across the table and lots of innuendo, but it struck me as being such a ploy to get people speculating. It seemed that they were totally playing off the fact of the RPS phenomenon, after all the attention would be GREAT advertising for the movie.
I sat their shocked, like "Are they actually TRYING to generate RPS on purpose?!?"
So the whole slash/incest/"Bromance"/RPS culture is becoming very poular from what it looks like.
*sighs* I am so emabarrassed for writing so much. I am soooo SORRY!
Re: ITA...well....somewhat...lol
Date: 2008-11-13 05:36 pm (UTC)I don't read RPS unless one of my friends either writes it or shows me something that somebody else wrote. It's kind of hard with Jared and Jensen though, and sometimes I want to smack our fanbase around a bit because we come off as crazy and possessive, you know? I just like to watch them together because they're cute and hilarious and seem to really enjoy each other's company, not necessarily because I think they're going home and doing it. *giggles*
A lot of it today is advertising, but think about it; it's also changing mentality. Our generation is more accepting of this kind of subtext (or just full-on text), and the actors are part of it. My guy friends joke around like that all the time, so I enjoy watching popular figures exhibiting the same kind of behavior because it makes them seem more... accessible, I guess. There's that initial squee of "Ha! RPS!" but it really doesn't affect me all that much. I'm more about real dynamics than that "Ooh, hot guys doing it!" tact.
I'm glad it's growing; I just don't want these people to start freaking out because of the crazy fangirls out there.
It's fine, as far as I'm concerned.
Re: ITA...well....somewhat...lol
Date: 2008-11-13 06:00 pm (UTC)I love rare pairings. I will ship something and/or try to find slash for it just because it's pretty. The characters don't even have to have met. Which now makes me want to write Dick/Weevil. That would be fucking hot.
However I love pairings that have tons of chemistry too. Like Sam'n'Dean. They just fit each other and compliment one another and I can't not ship it.
I will read RPS but it has to be done a certain way and I love very realistic fics. There's one author I've been following who's dealing with abuse, steroid use and erectile dysfunction and it's an amazing story. At the same time I have this complete slave AU I'm reading with JDM/Jensen that's so well written that even though it's not my normal kinda fic I couldn't help but read it and get sucked into it.
Thank goodness I don't like Jason Biggs or I would be cooing over how adorable that was. While at the same time not planning on seeing that movie.
Don't worry about the length, it's fine.
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Date: 2009-05-30 03:25 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2009-06-09 12:21 am (UTC)I'm no good at commenting back, that's why this has taken so long. So just... thanks for letting me know how much you liked this and if you're looking for more 'cest fics of the brothers I have a couple more in my memories.
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Date: 2010-01-29 07:31 pm (UTC)This fic made me get teary. I know how sad that Cassidy can look, and good god, he can look just as little and helpless, too. All of this is completely and utterly true about both of them and I seriously loved it. I was like "a-awww" then ";;;; Beav" and then ..well, yeah, you get it. I loved it. ♥
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Date: 2010-01-29 07:35 pm (UTC)Anyways, thank you so much!! This is one of my favorite stories that I've written and I love knowing other people love it as much as me. *grin*
Thank you for taking the time to let me know, you totally brightened up my whole afternoon!
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Date: 2010-01-31 09:23 pm (UTC)And fklsdjf I seriously just...yeah. if you ever write more, I'll have an epic squealing fit and hug you through the internet XD
\o/ I love making people happy! Yaaay~ You're welcome~
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Date: 2010-01-31 09:37 pm (UTC)I'm writing another fic with these two as we speak. Very consensual but hopefully still hot. :D