I forgot this story, forgive me, but it was because I had my own one with them on a desk going on and the first time I read it, I was like, oh fuck, this is way hotter than mine!
Then the phone rang and Nathan just stopped, buried completely inside of him and Peter almost screamed at the halt of sensation, as shocked as if his brother had poured ice water over him. He came close to cursing but managed to bite his tongue before saying anything that would bring punishment later.
There's a lot of great writing in this one but the above is my favorite moment, because it captures the characters really well, and the tension between them is so clear.
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Date: 2008-06-08 12:13 am (UTC)Then the phone rang and Nathan just stopped, buried completely inside of him and Peter almost screamed at the halt of sensation, as shocked as if his brother had poured ice water over him. He came close to cursing but managed to bite his tongue before saying anything that would bring punishment later.
There's a lot of great writing in this one but the above is my favorite moment, because it captures the characters really well, and the tension between them is so clear.