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Date: 2008-05-03 04:33 am (UTC)
This was way worth the wait! *makes grabby hands at fic*

Every detail was exquisite. No-nonsense Nathan, so particular and precise, always in control, and Peter unable to resist giving himself over. I really loved these two parts, in all their contrast:

Pain sizzled over his body and the next thing he realized was that Nathan had gathered him up and was soothing him, managing to sound pleased at the same time.

...

“Oh god!” Peter gripped the desk edge, trying not to move away and to relax. “Please no more, I can't take it!”

“Peter,” Nathan sounded disappointed. “You can and you will. You know I won't hurt you and you will stop this whining unless you would like to be disciplined.”


That hint of sweetness, but of course Nathan has to shove it away, any vulnerability, and make Peter so vulnerable before him, like he knows what's best. Peter's slight uncertainty about it at the end, but still willing to give in...

Yum. Delicious angst and hot, hot sex. *smishes you*

Thanks so much for this!!
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